Major fire elemental

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-	This is a swirling, shifting flame that, though lacking any obvious means of locomotion, moves freely through the air with	+	This is a swirling, shifting flame that, though lacking any obvious means of locomotion, moves freely through the air with
-	cohesion and apparent conscious intent. You recognize it as a major fire elemental, an entity of significant power from the	+	cohesion and apparent conscious intent. You recognize it as a major fire elemental, an entity of significant power from the
-	elemental plane of Fire. Though possessed of awareness, elementals are more akin to temporarily separated, dimly conscious	+	elemental plane of Fire. Though possessed of awareness, elementals are more akin to temporarily separated, dimly conscious
-	portions of their parent plane than fully sapient beings. It appears to be composed of a thick, intense field of wavering	+	portions of their parent plane than fully sapient beings. It appears to be composed of a thick, intense field of wavering
-	orange radiance and an intense, vibrant red-orange radiance. It has a tracery of sparkling light within and around it.	+	orange radiance and an intense, vibrant red-orange radiance. It has a tracery of sparkling light within and around it.
-	It is giving off light.	+	It is giving off light.
-	It looks about thirty-two and a half dimins across. It weighs about one hundred seventy-five dekans.	+	It looks about thirty-two and a half dimins across. It weighs about one hundred seventy-five dekans.
-	It is in good shape.	+	It is in good shape.

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This is a swirling, shifting flame that, though lacking any obvious means of locomotion, moves freely through the air with 
cohesion and apparent conscious intent.  You recognize it as a major fire elemental, an entity of significant power from the 
elemental plane of Fire.  Though possessed of awareness, elementals are more akin to temporarily separated, dimly conscious 
portions of their parent plane than fully sapient beings.  It appears to be composed of a thick, intense field of wavering 
orange radiance and an intense, vibrant red-orange radiance.  It has a tracery of sparkling light within and around it.  
It is giving off light.

It looks about thirty-two and a half dimins across.  It weighs about one hundred seventy-five dekans.

It is in good shape.