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==Typos == ==Typos ==
 +Typo, perspective, wooden barrel: Your lid has been sealed shut, and would require specialized tools to reopen it without destroying part of the barrel.
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 +plurality, forest clearing longdesc, Lump of fallen snow lie scattered across the forest floor in huge heaps.
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 +directionality typo, craggy stony outcropping, landmark: A stony overhang stands to the eastward and westward.
 +Typo, Missing race, Khoseortnutor, longdesc: He is a wiry old male with wild blonde hair, but a very calm look in his blue eye eyes.
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 +dog, longdesc, redundant Description_Type_Generic at beginning
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 +typo, longdesc, Varkain: With a chiseled jawline, wavy golden hair, and blue eyes that sparkling like a lake at midday,
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 +Missing Material Name, Longdesc, Adv. Guild: The walls of this establishment are made from slats of roughly hewn oaken.
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 +typo, noncombat chat, kaskigarsen: Kaskigarsen asserts, |(*If anyone is responsible for the rpesence of the bee people here, it would be me. They have traded me honey in exchange for me showing them where some decent
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 +typo, longdesc, musical store: On either side of the door are a shelves of extra musical gear.
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 +typo, longdesc, wrecked store: the furnishing splinters, trashed, and thrown around into a dishevelled mess.
 +typo, extra article, longdesc, bludgeon shop: Along the front and back walls are a racks of blunt weapons.
== Grammar == == Grammar ==

Revision as of 18:51, 13 December 2011

Leave errata, bugs, typos, etc here. I'll address them when I can.

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Typo, perspective, wooden barrel: Your lid has been sealed shut, and would require specialized tools to reopen it without destroying part of the barrel.

plurality, forest clearing longdesc, Lump of fallen snow lie scattered across the forest floor in huge heaps.

directionality typo, craggy stony outcropping, landmark: A stony overhang stands to the eastward and westward. Typo, Missing race, Khoseortnutor, longdesc: He is a wiry old male with wild blonde hair, but a very calm look in his blue eye eyes.

dog, longdesc, redundant Description_Type_Generic at beginning

typo, longdesc, Varkain: With a chiseled jawline, wavy golden hair, and blue eyes that sparkling like a lake at midday,

Missing Material Name, Longdesc, Adv. Guild: The walls of this establishment are made from slats of roughly hewn oaken.

typo, noncombat chat, kaskigarsen: Kaskigarsen asserts, |(*If anyone is responsible for the rpesence of the bee people here, it would be me. They have traded me honey in exchange for me showing them where some decent

typo, longdesc, musical store: On either side of the door are a shelves of extra musical gear.

typo, longdesc, wrecked store: the furnishing splinters, trashed, and thrown around into a dishevelled mess. typo, extra article, longdesc, bludgeon shop: Along the front and back walls are a racks of blunt weapons.

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Requests for additions

This is nice

Totally badass

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